I especially like Jarred defending Jen when Chris calls him being slow by telling him that Jen´s just shy. That´s hilarious, dear! And a very classy way to meet your prompt without really featuring a shy!Jen, too!
I also like all the examples you´ve found and came up with in order to show Jen´s dork!self instead of just calling him dorky and leave it at that. This would be one of the things that distinguishes great from poor writing in my book. So, much praise on that!
Another brain wrenching and funny and challenging thing indeed is the question of ***How do you romance a guy?*** I find myself sitting here and seriously contemplating about this :-)
Next thing I like to pieces is the difference you point out in how it feels when being blown by someone you are in love with as opposed to someone you don´t have these kinda feelings for. ´cause that´s exactly what makes it special and magical.
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Date: 2007-10-29 11:49 pm (UTC)I especially like Jarred defending Jen when Chris calls him being slow by telling him that Jen´s just shy. That´s hilarious, dear! And a very classy way to meet your prompt without really featuring a shy!Jen, too!
I also like all the examples you´ve found and came up with in order to show Jen´s dork!self instead of just calling him dorky and leave it at that. This would be one of the things that distinguishes great from poor writing in my book. So, much praise on that!
Another brain wrenching and funny and challenging thing indeed is the question of ***How do you romance a guy?*** I find myself sitting here and seriously contemplating about this :-)
Next thing I like to pieces is the difference you point out in how it feels when being blown by someone you are in love with as opposed to someone you don´t have these kinda feelings for. ´cause that´s exactly what makes it special and magical.
Congratulations on this lovely piece of art!