I is entrancing? *blushes* So pleased you liked it, and that you liked the verses - I love using the bible for porn *evilgrin*
I'm not too fussed about the anon comment - I think they may have been objecting to my 'more hyphens the better, scatter them around like rose petals' approach to punctuation, lol! Hopefully I can get a nice Grammar Nazi beta to beat that out of me for bigbang - there are so many brilliant writers signed up for it and I don't want to show myself up!
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Date: 2008-01-29 09:10 pm (UTC)I'm not too fussed about the anon comment - I think they may have been objecting to my 'more hyphens the better, scatter them around like rose petals' approach to punctuation, lol!
Hopefully I can get a nice Grammar Nazi beta to beat that out of me for bigbang - there are so many brilliant writers signed up for it and I don't want to show myself up!